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Money arriving in a poor neighbourhood creates claims on it before its owner can even collect it. Once the neighbours learn of the remittance, a blessing turns into a source of trouble. The recipient carries the burden of the money without yet having its benefit.
A bureaucracy need not be unusually cruel to defeat someone. The same rigid procedures become impassable for a man who cannot read, does not speak the officials' language, and has no money for bribes. He even has to pay a stranger to read him his own message.
When a windfall becomes known, some of those who ask for a share are truly in need and some are probably not. The recipient cannot tell which is which. He is caught between helping people worse off than himself and protecting what is his, and neither choice is clean.
A poor man cannot get an identity card without a photo, a birth certificate and a stamp, and he has none of them. He cannot cash his money order without the card. Each requirement points to another one he cannot meet, so the money stays out of reach.
Neighbours who gossip about a scandal act like a tragic chorus. Their talk does not just comment on events; it builds toward ostracism. In the end the outcast is driven away, as a lone mother whose child was fathered by her own father is expelled.
The underprivileged face two oppressors at once. One is a corrupt bureaucratic system inherited from colonial rule. The other is traditional custom that can be just as brutal, so escaping one does not free anyone from the other.
Even when a village falls apart or a mother is cast out, something survives to begin again. The child who outlives the tragedy carries life forward. Decline and the chance of renewal exist side by side.